Author's Note:
I wrote a personal narrative about the
teaching of my father when I was a child because thanks to parents, I am the
person I am now.
After writing this piece, I paused to
realize that my way of thinking is based on my parent’s view. I felt I want to
obey the teachings of my parents in the future.
While I was writing this piece, my
classmates, Moro and Saya, gave me suggestions. Moro gave me some positive comments
and pointed out the part that was difficult to understand. So I tried to change
some words to be more clearly. And Saya advised me to add my family photo from when
I was a child. Thanks Moro and Saya!
This is my first piece↓
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